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I have been sick with the flue for the past week, but I decided to get on my comp and draw this up today because I was feeling better : D I just have to draw Luna and Crescent Moon and then I will be posting a new poll to draw more character couples from MLP!

Big Mac is such a gentle giant I feel like he'd give her a lot of cute kisses like this.

Sorry for the slightly sloppy look of it! I wanted to practice my line work since I've been doing a lot of lineless work as of late! Let me know what you think!!
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Allright, you requested a critique, here we go, prepare for destruction^^

jk... so what we see here is one of the shipped couples straight outta the show

the depiction is quite good, although I'm not sure if BigMac would wear that much makeup xD

the expression on both of their faces matches the scenario perfectly, Cheerilee looks like she enjoys it, with a mind at peace, knowing to be in safety
BigMac on the other hand shows with just few significant details love and protectivness

the mane- and tail-style is quite good, also, the more feminine body of Cheerilee in front of the bigger, more masculine body of BM is a really good contrast

what you should consider using would be, in my humble opinion, shadows, as they improve the three-dimensinal aspect

but nonetheless, it's quite a good drawing, and the contures are well defined, I for one like it